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I stand outside your window pane,
pressing my fingers against the glass,
hoping the fingerprints I leave behind,
won’t go unnoticed,
and you’ll think of me.

I left a t-shirt in your room,
covered in my well-known scent,
thinking that if you knew my smell,
you’ll think of me,
and have regrets.

The last time I was with you,
I cried a tear that hit the bed,
maybe your finger will brush that spot,
and when you think of me crying,
your heart will be heavy of self-contempt.

Do you remember yesterday?
When you found your stuff in the front yard?
Maybe when you picked it up,
it hurt your heart,
and tears fell from your eyes.

Again, I stand outside your window,
noticing my picture on your wall,
maybe you forgot to take it down,
but I hope your using it as a reminder,
that I’m worth holding onto.

Please come back to me.
©2006-2009 ~CrimsonLullaby
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Author's Comments

Even though I've been in a wonderful mood lately, I managed to write something sad. Hip hip hooray, right? Something sad, that fits the kind of poetry I write.

Anyways, happy reading. I've got nothing else to say, except, the only reason I wrote this, is because I thought of the first line, and had to write a poem from it!

Bye!

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:iconmarcial-alejandro:
Wow, that really tugs at the heart strings. Wonderful imagry and extremly good use of wording. You really bring out a soft sorrow and wistfulness.

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The heart believes that which the mind cannot comprehend.
[link] <---A poem I think everyone should read. (Not to glorify my own work)
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:iconcrimsonlullaby:
Thank you. :D I try to capture the essence of heartbreak in many different angles, so my poetry isn't all the same. :) I think sorrow is the easiest thing for me to write about....I just don't know why.

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Love me and never hate me, be with me and never leave me, kiss my lips and tell me you love me, and I will have a truly happy life.
:iconmarcial-alejandro:
oddly enough, sorrow, loss, and depression are the easiest things to write about. Also you tend to get the best writing out of it, sadly enough. it's really hard to write about love and not have it come out mushy and stuff.

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The heart believes that which the mind cannot comprehend.
[link] <---A poem I think everyone should read. (Not to glorify my own work)
[link] <---my gallery, please do have
:iconcrimsonlullaby:
There's nothing wrong with mushiness :D

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Love me and never hate me, be with me and never leave me, kiss my lips and tell me you love me, and I will have a truly happy life.
:iconone-moonlit-night:
I really like that, very emotion-packed. I haven't read anything in a while, this was a good poem to get me back into the poetry mood. I'm glad you're happy, though!

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:iconcrimsonlullaby:
I'm glad it got you back into the poetry mood :D I hate when I'm out of it. Hahhaa, yeah, being happy is definitely better than being sad.

Thanks for the fav :)

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"It was MEEEEE, I was the turkey all along!" - Gir
:iconone-moonlit-night:
Yeah, I need to write something new really badly... I'm so out of it... I haven't written anything since Summer started, and school's almost back in...

No problem, I loved it.

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