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I awake every morning
to a bed that's been tossed in,
and turned in,
but I don't care.
You can elbow my sides,
and kick my shins,
as long as I have the pleasure
of spending every day with you.

There's always a period of nothingness,
where we lay and laugh together,
Then maybe, we'll decide how our day goes....
And we might just stay in our pjs,
playing video games all day...
But I'll always have fun as long as you're there.
You can insult my playing all you want,
but I'll just smile and nod,
just to humor you.

There are always dull moments, I will admit;
which are killed rather quickly...
with a poke or twenty.
Sometimes it's irritating to be so ticklish,
but you enjoy it,
and I get a laugh (ha, ha)
which is all that really matters,
for the time being.  

And there are times we forget that love can be simple,
when we make it so unnecessarily complicated,
that we throw ourselves down rocky hills...
and it'll take a few bumps and bruises
to set things straight again...
after all, what doesn't kill us makes us stronger...
Truer words were never said.

Then the night will come to see us,
and we'll end up where we began,
in a bed a little too small for two people,
So we'll toss and turn,
and I'll be smothered by you,
but I won't care,
as long as you smother me with love,
when the sun rises again.
©2006-2009 ~CrimsonLullaby
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Author's Comments

*mocks the Ford commercials*

This is life *insert boring "life" scene here*

This is life in love.


I'm so clever.

Dedicated of course to my Love, who of course, was my inspiration :)

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:iconalucardia:
That's a neato poem. I really liked the 3rd stanza because it made me laugh. Awesome poem. =D
:iconcrimsonlullaby:
Lol, well, I guess there is some humor in it....which I did intend for that stanza at least. The rest is all a big pile of mush :)

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"It was MEEEEE, I was the turkey all along!" - Gir
:iconalucardia:
Haha. It's a good pile of mush. I really enjoyed it. =D
:iconcrimsonlullaby:
Why thank you :D

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"It was MEEEEE, I was the turkey all along!" - Gir
:iconzurrid:
i read all of your stuff but never left a coment, you are really good, i hope you become famous someday.
:iconzurrid:
i think poetry takes more talent than drawing and a hellm of a lot more concetration. keep it up
:iconone-moonlit-night:
Beautiful.

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:iconlgthaoshi14:
"And there are times we forget that love can be simple,
when we make it so unnecessarily complicated..."
I love that line. Great poem! :heart:

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Simple words my dear,
it's all about simple, honest words...

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