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After weeks of being separated,
I still lay here contemplating,
Why I can’t be the one….
…and though life goes on around me,
I stand still within that stare,
full of tears and hard apologies,
as I was forced to walk away
from all I loved so tenderly….
leaving behind a trail of my shattered heart.

Now tissues are littered everywhere,
piling up upon the floor,
they bury pictures of you and me,
that no longer make me smile…
…and the candy wrappers scatter,
When I roll over to sleep, to cry,
or when I watch the shadows dance
into the darkness of the night,
bringing me back to my loneliness.

They say time can make things better,
But I did not fall for time,
I broke concrete when you let me go,
I crash landed in the ground…
Your surprises always touched me,
but to choke me, I wouldn’t believe,
that’s what I get for falling quickly,
and trusting that you would catch me,
saving me from myself.

I know that I don’t weep alone,
I know that you weep too,
Why can’t we do this together…
like we used to do?
I’m crowded by tear-drenched teddy bears,
they can’t console me like you do,
I could really use the company,
I could use someone like you.
Please grace me with your presence one more time…
©2006-2009 ~CrimsonLullaby
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Author's Comments

Where I've been before, and will most likely be again...but nothing is for certain

It makes me kind of sad to know that the person who breaks your heart, is the one you want more than anything after it's happened.

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:icontiger--eyes:
"I broke concrete when you let me go" <---- Lovin' the visual, as with
"I’m crowded by tear drenched teddy bears."

Aaand I think there should be a hyphen between "tear" and "drenched". :)

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~miss tiger

The heavens are gorgeous tonight.
:iconjumpinbean:
this brings back memories of an all too familiar feeling. i think you really captured a piece of heartbreak.

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JumpinBean
:iconcrimsonlullaby:
I think I actually had a hyphen the first time I placed that in the poem.

Everyone falls in love...but no one ever seems to think what happens if the person who's holding you up lets you hit the ground.

Thanks for the comment as always :)

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Love me and never hate me, be with me and never leave me, kiss my lips and tell me you love me, and I will have a truly happy life.
:iconcrimsonlullaby:
I never actually thought about writing a poem of bed ridding myself after someone breaks my heart...I throw tissues everywhere, and either chomp down on anything chocolate, or don't eat at all...it all depends I guess.

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Love me and never hate me, be with me and never leave me, kiss my lips and tell me you love me, and I will have a truly happy life.
:iconfaeryseer:
Im crying. you will never hear me admit that again, but that, just, well im sure you know.
Im am totally feeling this. said it before, but theres something that makes this one seem so real and personal that it hits harder
:iconcrimsonlullaby:
Well, I cried when I started writing this, and when I finished writing this. You don't know how hard something will hit you, because you're in such disbelief that because you've believed that he's THE ONE for so long, that you're secure...then he breaks up with you, and you just want to do absolutely nothing....and I think this poem fits that feeling perfectly.

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Love me and never hate me, be with me and never leave me, kiss my lips and tell me you love me, and I will have a truly happy life.
:iconfaeryseer:
oh it does! i remember when my bf broke up with me and i expected not to care as usual, but it hit me so hard, I would cry out of nowhere because I felt such an incredible loss. and i dont know how you can pack such power into so many of your poems, but it keeps me going, and it inspires me.(because im one of those who creates art out of pain) and its always so beautiful how it turns out
:iconcrimsonlullaby:
You have no idea how much that comment meant to me. I'm glad that I can reach someone and inspire them for other things, through my words. It's invigorating :)

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Love me and never hate me, be with me and never leave me, kiss my lips and tell me you love me, and I will have a truly happy life.
:iconalucardia:
Why do girls want what they can't have? :P Heh jk. ;P This is a very powerful poem, filled with love and pain and lonliness. Ofcourse I've never experienced that feeling...although I do want to :P I have an insight of how this kinda thing goes. Well I enjoyed the poem. =D I find it best for writing when your emotions are running high.

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